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My first grunge

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My first attempt at making a grunge style piece.
Hope you like it
Please comment and gimme some tips if
you know more about it then I do.
I used the urban vector bushes available at:
[link]
Thanks times a bajillion to obsidiandawn for making these! :)
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Woo! Critique time. So, I like this. A lot. :D

But, on to pickiness.

I like the balance of it. White space is important, especially when certain parts of a composition are going to be cluttered, as they usually are in grunge-style pieces. The little music notes make a nice transition between the clutter and the white space.

I wish the texture of the background was played up a bit more. Make it stronger, and more crinkled, and showing through in the vector brushes. It would add to the grunge effect, without overdoing it, I think. The texture is just too subtle for me.

Now, the picture is bothering me a little. Did you apply some sort of filter to it? I'm not against a filter effect here, but it looks kind of low-res, which takes away from the quality of what is actually a very good piece.

To sum up... very, very nice. :D